OCTOPUS IN LOVE DRAFT

OCTOPUS IN LOVE DRAFT

As you may see in the picture, here I started a draft to see how my work was going to be, and tried to put some ideas, some narration that could help me at time of writting the real story. I had some mistakes and in the real work I tried to improve my writting and don't make so much mistakes. After making it, I saw that I had some things to change and more information to put on, also I had some punctuation problems and I had to correct them in the real work.