Octopus In Love

OCTOPUS IN LOVE

Once upon a time, there were two octopuses that were in love of each other. They lived together in a fishpond that was in a fish store. The two octopuses had a strong love for each other, and they couldn't imagine a day far away from their love.

One day, a man came to the fish store, and bought the female octopus. Her took her, weight her, and paid for her, before walk to his car and go away; but when the male octopus saw that the man was taking away his beloved girl, he jumped from the fishpond and run after the car. He felt so much fear for his love, because he tought that the man was going to kill her and cooked her, that he sticked to the car, but the man was driving very fast, and because of that, the male octopus came over to the windshield of the car, scaring the man. The human activated the wipers and the male octopus hanged to them and started to freak out. The female octopus saw that her dear boyfriend, and pull the hand break, causing the car started to whirl and the couple of octopuses flew out from the car. The female octopus saw that they could scape, so she tried to pull up her love, but when she was doing that, the man saw them trying to go away, and turned on the car to catch them. Scared, the two octopuses jumped and fell to a pool. Rapidly, they began tu to jump from one pool to another, while the man was chasing them with his car, but then, they jumped in a sunshade, then in a beach ball, and finaly, the man cought them, but he didn't realized that the car was going to fall down stairs, actually, the car started to fall down stairs, but that didn't stopped the angry human, who started to hit the couple agains the car. The couple, hanged to a clothes twine and the man didn't saw that he was going directly to the ocean.

The couple tought that they were finaly free, but then, a seagul took the male octopus from the clothes twine. The female octopus got angry; she hanged from the wall and the balcony that were next to her; took impulse and flew directly to the seagul, and freed her beloved octopus.

After all, they fall down to the ocean, and the couple started a new life and a new family together, at the place that they pertained, living happily ever after.

Reflection:

      My reflection about this work is, that for me was a little bit difficult to make a good narration of the different situation and make them to have sense. After seen the video, the different scenes of the story were mixed in my mind, so I had to see the video many other times and also, I had to stop the video to tell almost all the details of the story, because I wanted it to be complete. 
In terms of grammar, narration and punctuation, was very difficcult, because I didn't know how to narrate some parts of the story and the grammar was more difficult to think how the word and the utterances must be correct.
Although, I learned how to make a story make sense, and how to create a good narration. I knew some new words and my vocabulary increased. I liked it very much; it was a lovely story.